Undoing the Silence accomplishes what other
books on writing do not: it links our writing to our beliefs, our
activism, our voice.
Dunlap begins one of the early chapters in the
book by observing that "most people will do just about anything
but sit down to write, even though all of us have powerful voices
somewhere inside." Citing her own experience in the Free Speech
Movement, she reflects, "in that atmosphere of heightened awareness,
we found strength to say what was hard, even painful—to think
and articulate in ways that would stand up to scrutiny. Every person
became eloquent. This was democracy.
The stories in this book
not only show us new ways to unearth the power of our own experience;
they connect the writing struggles of peace activists in California,
labor organizers in South Africa, and community organizers in Boston
with the changes these activists are trying to make in the world.
So, although the book is very much about the personal writing struggles
of activists from many social justice organizations, Louise provides
us with a context, a reason, for them to duel with the silencing
ghosts of their past.
The book's writing tools include freewriting
techniques, strategies for reaching our intended audience, an innovative
exercise for feedback, and tactics for rethinking, editing and
rewriting our free flowing drafts—all effective tools to
improve our writing. But for me, the exploration of the writing
process was most valuable. Louise opened up a whole new arena by
giving me a way to think about my own writing process. As a researcher
and occasional journalist I write all the time. My goals were to
produce analytical pieces that were "on deadline" and
relatively easy to follow. Sometimes the writing flowed and sometimes
it didn't, but I never gave the process much thought. It was magic.
It was painful. It was both.
In the beginning of the book, Dunlap
cites a South African activist who observes that, "We do not
yet feel free to write what we think—and that means we aren't
even thinking it fully. Undoing the Silence helps us delve into
our psyches to explore our true feelings about a subject so that
we can feel free enough to write what we think. It also teaches
us how to analyze our own writing process so that we can recognize
the power of our own voice.
— Review by Gary Delgado, Emeritus Director
of Applied Research Center in Oakland CA and a founder of the Center
for Third World Organizing |